MOVIE NIGHT

Here’s an extract from a crime novela I wrote around the time the last Blockbuster Video closed.  Darryl lives with his aunt Sophie Westburne.  Darryl and Dodge, both in their early twenties, work for Dodge’s uncle Stan McKay at Stan’s video store, Video Vampire.  Stan has become the chief suspect in a series of murders in Vancouver.

This extract details Stan’s arrest at Video Vampire.

by Jerry Donaldson

about 2,000 words

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“Darryl,” Dodge said, “oh, man I’m glad to hear from you.”

Dodge never phoned Darryl at home, because he was terrified of Aunt Sophie. On the rare occasion that Dodge needed Darryl to cover a shift for him or whatever, Dodge had Stan make the call. Stan seemed to take a perverse delight in being as rude as possible to her during these and other video business-related calls to the Westburne residence. Small wonder Sophie had a low opinion of Stan, Darryl reflected.  But then again, Stan did not really have to take any unusual steps to upset and alienate people. That was just his nature; bellicose, foul-mouthed, smelly, weird.

“I saw the news, Dodge.  What’s going on?”

“Stan did it, Darryl, he told me he did it, did it again. He murdered a second pair of people yesterday or the day before, whenever it was. He told me about it last night. Just like the first murders.  The woman was in the store computer, he showed me, man! And the murders were in the news yesterday. Didn’t you see the news?Continue reading “MOVIE NIGHT”

GONE IN SIXTY SECONDS

Here is another in a series of micro-stories I wrote featuring smokers.  Let me know what you think.  I’ll post a fresh piece tomorrow, hot off the press. 

Stay home,  wash your hands and be sure your neighbours are in good shape.

by Jerry Donaldson

about 500 words

Standing on the balcony of his 14th floor Vancouver condo, Jack stared at the butt of Laurie’s last cigarette, crushed out in a steel ashtray on the little bistro table. It was stained with her red lipstick.

She’d always looked great in red. At the Cinemax in a short red dress, red lipstick and nails, her white teeth flashing while they laughed together in the ticket line up. Or at the wheel of her red Porsche Speedster, her blonde hair flying as they cruised the city streets on a warm August evening. Laurie loved to drive fast.

He dumped the ashtray into a wastebasket and wiped it out. He wiped down the glass table top and carried their two dinner plates inside. Larry the dog followed him in, hoping for scraps.

“Sorry, chum,” said Jack, “nothing this time.” He put the plates into the dishwasher. Then he opened a can of beer and took it with him back out onto the balcony. Larry followed him. Jack stretched out in a canvas deck chair.

Man and dog then watched the last embers of the early September sunset extinguished by the warm, creeping darkness.

Jack didn’t smoke, and over the six weeks of their whirlwind romance he’d insisted Laurie light up outside. After a breakneck session in the bedroom Laurie would wrap herself in his purple terry bathrobe and go have a smoke on the balcony. Jack would sit across across from her at the little glass table wearing only boxers. There were probably neighbours peeping. So what.

Tonight they’d eaten Chinese take-out together on the balcony, and she’d told him they were done.

She’d taken a hard pull on her cigarette and said, “I’m moving on, Jack, it’s been fun, but I don’t see us as a couple.”

“I guess I didn’t make it through my probationary period.”

“Something like that.”

She’d then taken the last drag off her cigarette and stabbed it into the ashtray. She smoked them right to the filter. Every last puff. That was the way she lived: pedal to the metal, balls-out, hell-bent for leather.

“Yeah, babe, you’re probably right,” he’d said. “We had some great times though, didn’t we?”

“You know it.”

Laurie’d opened her little clutch purse, taken out her lipstick and touched up her full red lips. Then she’d capped the silver tube, dropped it back into her purse and snapped it shut. She’d leaned across the little glass bistro table and kissed him full on the lips, soft and slow. Then she’d stood up.

“Gotta run, stud, see you,” she’d said. And then she was gone.

It was now full dark out. Larry was snoring gently. Jack looked at his IPhone and noticed it was only 9:30. It felt a lot later.

“C’mon, Larry,” he said, getting out of his chair, “I’m wiped, let’s have an early night.”

TEN WEEKS

I wrote this one a couple years back for one contest or another.  Let me know what you think. 

I’ll post chapter 3 of  “Terminal A” later this week.

by Jerry Donaldson

about 1,200 words

The young couple sat side-by-side on a bench near the little park’s wrought iron gates. In the 1910s, when the park was young, a watchman opened the gates in the morning and shut them at sundown. Horse carriages and Ford runabouts traveled the narrowed cobbled drive on warm afternoons, through the lawns and gardens and around the small lake with its splashing fountain. Nowadays the big gates were chained shut, and cars were not allowed inside the park.

“Heather,” he said to her, “can we talk more about this tomorrow? It’s a big problem we need to discuss carefully.”

“It’s a problem? I’m pregnant and it’s a problem?”Continue reading “TEN WEEKS”

COFFEE SHOP QUICKY

Today’s offering is an extract from a hard-boiled detective novelette I wrote a while back.  I am currently working on a second Randy Niles story entitled “Old Stories Buried Deep”.

The hard-boiled genre is not for everyone.  Let me know what you think.

 

by Jerry Donaldson

about 1800 words

I’m Randy Niles and I’ve been a licensed private investigator for twenty years or so. It’s been okay, I guess. I don’t always feel great about what I do, but it’s probably the same for a banker or a lawyer or a plumber. There’s good days and bad days, and we all just do the best we can.

I’m going to tell you about a case I worked a few years back. At that time I was dating a city homicide detective named Delores Marquez. I’ve dated a few cops over the years, in case you’re interested. I like a woman who carries a gun and knows how to handle herself. Delores and I went together like ham and eggs. Or Smith and Wesson, maybe.

So, one August evening about 11 p.m. Delores and I were lying in her big brass bed. I was staring up at the ceiling. Delores’s head was on my shoulder. It was a muggy night and a thunderstorm threatened. The bedroom window in her third story condo was open and the curtains moved listlessly in the faint breeze.

“So, Randy,” she said. “You ever heard the name Marion Stone?”Continue reading “COFFEE SHOP QUICKY”

THE RUST BELT

I started this story a couple of years back and ran out of direction.  I’d appreciate suggestions.  About 4500 words

By Jerry Donaldson

A rusty, jagged sunrise collected in the east, orange and violent. It was 4:45 am and a new day was barging in. I’d been up half the night, sitting on the back porch thinking about McDougall. He was now four days overdue and I was getting edgy.

Gathering light hardened up the shadows in the overgrown yard behind my ugly little rental house. Beyond the fence, down the hill and miles away, the mighty Ohio rolled west toward the invisible horizon. Ten years ago the fires of the foundry reflected dull red in the black water all night long. But the foundry shut down, and now the nights are dark.

I got up out of the broken and sagging old armchair, stretched, and went into the house. The screen door slammed behind me. I had time to shower, dress and eat something before I drove into town to meet the eastbound Greyhound at 6:15. For the fifth day running. Maybe today MacDougall would be on the bus.Continue reading “THE RUST BELT”

DRAG STRIP DATE

Chapter 2

.  .  .   Then her right hand dropped limp into her lap and her left slipped gently from his neck to his shoulder.  She reluctantly allowed his lips to leave hers.  He dropped back against the seat cushion, took a deep breath and stared across the crowded cafe.

Dazzled, she thought, he’s dazzled!  And he was, no mistake at all about that.  Anyone could see it!

“Hi, Darla,” he said finally. “How was your day?”

“Much better now, kind sir,” she replied. “And you?”

“What can I say?  I put in a full day’s work with nothing but you on my mind!  It was torture!  Dark and gray and seemingly endless torment!  But now I’m here with you and the sun has returned to my sky. ”

His right hand reached for hers.  She felt the horny, work-hardened calluses on his stone mason’s hand, and the fire within her banked to a warm, comfortable glow.  He turned his smiling, sun-bronzed, outdoorsy face to hers and their eyes met.  He had violet eyes, just like Elizabeth Taylor.  Stunning, mesmerizing eyes.  When they’d first met at the shopping plaza across the road (was that really only a week ago?) she’d assumed he wore tinted contacts.  The foolish affectation of a flyweight; not manly at all.  But, as it turned out, his eyes were the real deal.

But what about the rest of him?  His name was Luke, she knew that.  She also knew there was a powerful, animal attraction between them.  It was mind-blowing, really.  A moth to his flame, that’s how she felt.  And that’s why she hesitated, why she held back.  She’d been badly burned once before, and she was now determined to be responsible and sensible.  Determined to make her choices wisely.

It’s  like buying a car, she thought in her less romantic moments.  You have to look beyond the flash and glamour, beneath the red paint and the soft, deep bucket seats.  You must resist the satisfying rumble and throb of the engine, transmitted through a cherry-red nail-polished hand grasping the shifter.  Not give in to the breathtaking rush of speed and danger on an open road.

Because that, she thought primly, was the road to ruin.

She was not at all confident that things would pan out with Luke.  For one thing, he was a stone mason, a tradesman.  And she was a freshly minted doctor, an MD bound for glory in her father’s footsteps.  They were worlds apart.

Last week he’d been repairing the low rock wall in the parking lot in front of Stalk’s Supermarket when her bag of groceries had split wide open onto the pavement.  He’d helped her gather it all up, and he’d laughed at her obvious discomfiture.  Then he’d offered to buy her lunch to make up for it, and against her better judgement she’d accepted.  Since that day they’d met for coffee after work five days straight, and they’d talked about things: about him, about her, about the state of the world, the usual stuff.  He seemed well-informed and articulate.  But, she thought, anyone can stay current. The news is everywhere. All you need is an IPad and you can sound like Anderson Cooper, for gosh sakes.

            But at this time yesterday, here at the corner booth at Nick’s Cafe, there was an event, a game changer.  An older man with grey hair and a tweed jacket had stopped by their table.

“Excuse me dear lady, terribly sorry to intrude,” he’d said to her in a clipped British accent. “I need a word with your tablemate.”  He’d looked like one of the professors from the nearby university.  Which, of course, he was!  She’d nodded, and the polite stranger had turned to Luke.

“Hello young Mister Sims, “he’d said.  “I’ve your doctoral dissertation in the trunk of my car and it will save me a trip if I return it to you here, as long as that’s not a bother.”

“Not at all, Professor MacDougall, I’ll come out and grab it from you . And may I introduce my friend Darla Ellington?”

The older man turned to Darla. “I’m charmed, Miss Ellington.”  In the European manner, he waited for her to extend her hand before offering his.

“I’m pleased to meet you, sir,” she’d said.  And as the two men left the cafe she’d thought: This is an interesting turn of events.  .  .  .

 

 

 

 

THE BEACON

by Jerry Donaldson

about300 words

The long, hot slog up to the tiny clearing took us all day.  We arrived just as the sun dropped into the trees.

We did our best, like we’d been trained.  Smitty and Gonzales took picket duty.  They sat back to back watching the tree line, M-16s ready and spare magazines within easy reach.  Me and the Captain struggled and swore setting up the beacon.Continue reading “THE BEACON”

It’s Gertie, Dammit!

by Jerry Donaldson

499 words

(I wrote this in 2015.  It’s riff on the Lulu Lemon thing that was in the news a couple of years back)


“Who?”

“It’s Gertie.”

“Sorry, say that again?”

“Leonard, it’s Gertie, dammit! Give your head a shake, man.”

“Gertie, it’s–wait a sec—it’s 3:30 in the morning. I’m sleeping.”

“Not anymore, you’re not. Grab a pen and write this down.”Continue reading “It’s Gertie, Dammit!”

PARALLAX

by Jerry Donaldson

1,200 words

On Tuesday morning at 10 a.m.  Al Crawford had his dog put down at the Hillside Veterinary Clinic.  Nearly 15 years old, Charlie was blind, arthritic and worn-out.  Al paid his bill and left.

Charlie’s had been a good life. Dogs usually die before their owners.  Some men might outlive four, five, six dogs or more.  Al would get a new pup in a month or two.  He’d gotten Charlie from the breeder six weeks after old, deaf Guido was killed in the next-door neighbor’s driveway.  Guido had been sleeping under the neighbor’s Pontiac.Continue reading “PARALLAX”